Simple stones
Touched by footsteps of a memory
Now so precious
September 07, 2010
19:40
Kashiihama, Fukuoka, Japan
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September 7, 2010 by ~Maryam~
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~Maryam~
Very nice, photo as well as haiku.
Thank you dear Eelco
Beautiful, just beautiful…
Perhaps changing the word “Normal” to something with more resonance, a more poetic word could help. Everything is so soft and faded here. Normal is too bold.
Say, ordinary…….worthless…..simple… I don’t know.
You’re right!
Well I remember I was struggling to find a better word, but I couldn’t… thanks for suggestion